Sounds pretty solid to me!
My only thought is that you want to decouple the second layer of plywood from the joists, so was wondering about the 2" screws going into the joists through both layers of ply, and where the plywood seams/ends were falling (not the joists was what I was told).
Planning to use a decoupling product like Ditra?
Best regards and good luck with the project!
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Paul DIY